Other than the quotes technique, you could try imagine yourself describing the story to someone else who isn't the author and doesn't know it, as an intermediate step. This might seem a bit counter-intuitive. But if you develop your comments out of that, the author will see what you picked up on, in their story.
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Date: 2019-06-15 02:26 pm (UTC)This might seem a bit counter-intuitive. But if you develop your comments out of that, the author will see what you picked up on, in their story.