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baileyboybee ([personal profile] baileyboybee) wrote in [personal profile] grundyscribbling 2019-03-23 08:30 am (UTC)

Good story. You know they had moments where they reflected on might have been and wishing they could just go home. Great job conveying his exhaustion. I could feel it myself!

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